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Post by lyra on May 11, 2008 1:34:41 GMT -5
There, I hope it meets your standards...  |
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Post by Ayame on May 11, 2008 21:08:55 GMT -5
The secret word is incorrect.
Other than that, please give some explanation of how it is that Drez can talk; and is Drez a wolf or some other kind of canine?
The picture for the mark on the back of her neck is not working.
As a final note, what is the significance of the markings (i.e., are they birthmarks, tattoos, what?)?
Aside from those minor details, all's good. ^_^
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Post by x_LiCANDER . on May 11, 2008 23:51:13 GMT -5
AND!
In the history, you go on about how Lyra's mom is teaching her stuff.
So... How exactly did she end up in Anslema...?
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Post by Ayame on May 11, 2008 23:54:40 GMT -5
Ah! Good point, Licander! *exaults* Yes, that too. XD
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Post by lyra on May 12, 2008 16:06:30 GMT -5
lol, alrighty, I'll add those on. Or erase.  Alright, the secret password remains the same... PurplePuppy... |
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Post by x_LiCANDER . on May 12, 2008 16:52:18 GMT -5
*shakes head*
That isn't the right secret word.
Go back and read the rules carefully.
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Post by Ayame on May 12, 2008 22:23:33 GMT -5
There ya go. XD Accepted, can't wait to see her in character.
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Post by lyra on May 12, 2008 22:24:21 GMT -5
lol, me too!!!
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